Wednesday, April 4, 2012

THE CHAPTER OF A MIRROR


Written by Yasir

I looked up the mirror with horror,
Hooked for fathomless love however.
And have found a brainless creature.
Creeping to keep his own signature,
Ripping his eyes with some shower,
Having no towel in hands to cover!
Structure seems similar to mine,
Even the heart can’t choose to be wine!
Is this what you call the architecture?
Among the people who want adventure!

Taking off the pride away from him,
Led the man to be gentle with them!
In the World of expert swimmers,
He forgets to swim among skimmers!
And the reason was quite random,
Crying for air if they’ve drown seldom!


That Lake purified his thoughts of vast,
Although the marine too reflects the past!
The waves told the former tale story,
But not strong enough to take his glory!
I wish that image could be an actual one,
Carrying my body until it’s really done!

22 comments:

  1. wow...really marvellous with its rhyming schemes and thoughts atuned to its real feeling...good keep it up

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  2. wow .really awesome. ur fingers are blessed .keep it up boy

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  3. Gud one Yasir...continue 2 keep this talent in ur hand...

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  4. Great work da....You are a born talent yaar...Keep it going..

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  5. porichu machaaa......da.......ne poyi kadavule koopide...endha madhiri ezhutheridhekke kadavul unake romba talent koduthirikke.....nanni sollu machaa.....

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  6. Have done a very good Job Monu.... Liked it a lot... May Allah's Blessings be with you always my dear.. and I'm sure you will write more and more.. :) Keep up the talent da.

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  7. As i told u b4, thrs a magic n u .... Nd i'm proud 2 say tht u r ma schul mate

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  8. hii... it is super yasir.
    you keep on reading other poems,

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  9. ada,enik othiri eshttamayitto.
    never knw ni nannayi poems ezhuthumenn.
    so brilliantly done.so happy to hav such a frind.keep writing da.

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  10. liked it..........its awsome ...good one...keep going..

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  11. Wow! Really amazing! :) I liked it a lot :)

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